Eight Line Melancholy Melody

By happilydepressed

I slept up and fell awake
This all must be fake

As an illicit illusion illuminates an illustration of illogical  imagery
Maybe I'm overdosing on reality

Leave me in the darkness and i'll be fine
When hours of thought weigh heavy on my mind

Instead of saving their lives I saved my own
So I'll sit in my corner all alone

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Copyright 2020 happilydepressed
Published on Wednesday, November 18, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

1-Sleep Dream and Die-2-Uncomplicated Confusion-3-Soul Dream-4-Explained in Vain-5-Happily Depressed-6-These Thoughts-7-The Man Who Wouldn't Save The World-8-And the Thought is Gone
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, November 26, 2020, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    This was seamlessly done and read like the coda of an acid casualty. Tight piece, brilliantly worked.

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, November 26, 2020, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    Thank you i appreciate that : ) : (

  • I IS ME On Wednesday, November 18, 2020, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    Being able to see the matrix for what is can blow a fuse. Tight

  • happilydepressed On Wednesday, November 18, 2020, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    Thank you : ) : (

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