Disgust

By FlowMyTears

To be one who writes is to be
one who rubs a steam covered mirror,
and sometimes all you see are more
layers of filth.

Those kids:
they fall in love with their own suffering.

Nicotine stains do not cause cancer,
only the dogged wish to seal one's own fate.

"Only the strong are ready to die"

-Phillip Morris (TM)
 

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Published on Friday, November 13, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • I IS ME On Saturday, November 14, 2020, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    True but it's part of life, mistakes and learning includes pain. Tight

  • Quietus On Friday, November 13, 2020, Quietus (75)By person wrote:

    The last line really struck a chord with me. I think a lot of us don’t know who we would be without suffering, so we do fall in love with it in a way. It becomes a comfort, I think. Lovely, honest write.

  • FlowMyTears On Saturday, November 14, 2020, FlowMyTears (53)By person wrote:

    yeah it's atleast a phase we all go through, thanks

  • sheff On Friday, November 13, 2020, sheff (137)By person wrote:

    The first few lines ... wow.

  • FlowMyTears On Friday, November 13, 2020, FlowMyTears (53)By person wrote:

    the bottom cheesy lines are pretty much the layers of filth i see when i do this, thanks for the honest feedback!

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