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For a comment I would kill
By SolApathy
That’s right-The title of my work
I’ll kill for a comment
Vomit for a view
Give me chance and watch me spew
I’ll make you sick, too
Sick of these futile rhymes
Brought upon by my lackluster lines
You see I have no rhyme or reason
My darkness eroding my capacity to care
How many dark rhymes, or sunshine lines
Can fill a page before it’s time?
Surrender to the sadness of a void
My words tried to fill
Instead, my emotions always overspill
Yeah, for a comment I would kill
I’ll kill for a comment
Vomit for a view
Give me chance and watch me spew
I’ll make you sick, too
Sick of these futile rhymes
Brought upon by my lackluster lines
You see I have no rhyme or reason
My darkness eroding my capacity to care
How many dark rhymes, or sunshine lines
Can fill a page before it’s time?
Surrender to the sadness of a void
My words tried to fill
Instead, my emotions always overspill
Yeah, for a comment I would kill
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© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Monday, November 9, 2020.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
..There was never a better time to write that last line...Comments on "For a comment I would kill"
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On Saturday, November 14, 2020, I IS ME
(380)
wrote:
There is nothing wrong with your flow, we think that your style is tight
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On Wednesday, November 11, 2020, Aeon Dminique
(17) wrote:
You got my attention. Also kill others with kindness. Structure is good with your fine touches. Well put and straight to the point.
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On Wednesday, November 11, 2020, Cimmeria
(15) wrote:
Well I’m commenting “Very well done indeedâ€.
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On Tuesday, November 10, 2020, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
If it could save a life I'll comment unless you're killing the commentator, : ) : (
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