She's but a Paper Flower
By Chelsey Elaine
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Beautiful as ever on the surface,
not unlike a small Paper Flower.
So fragile inside, she’s without purpose.
Losing petals like sanity by the hour.
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Copyright 2019 Chelsey Elaine
Author's Note:
Allow me to introduce myself.Comments on "She's but a Paper Flower"
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On Tuesday, March 19, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
I enjoyed the metaphor here. I also like the irony of paper versus flower. :)
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On Sunday, March 17, 2019, SolApathy
(665) wrote:
A succinct tragedy of epic possibilities.
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On Friday, March 15, 2019, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
Chelsey my baby .. .. Let me love you . :)
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On Sunday, March 17, 2019, Chelsey Elaine
(79) wrote:
Oh I've missed you. Are you back? :p
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On Tuesday, March 5, 2019, Just Dave
(458) wrote:
packing so much feeling in so few words is something that eludes me. Great write. JD
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On Thursday, February 28, 2019, bpathos
(78) wrote:
I liked this. Being real on the net is real dangerous, be careful. Welcome to DP.
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On Thursday, February 28, 2019, Chelsey Elaine
(79) wrote:
This is me. so be it. i'm done hiding
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2019, soul_versing
(882) wrote:
I'm impressed, solid imagery and emotion. A person can learn a lot by observing another's scenery. --Write on
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On Monday, February 25, 2019, Divine hell
(249) wrote:
Beautiful write, I like how you use flower petals to represent sanity. Thanks for sharing and welcome to dark poetry.
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On Monday, February 25, 2019, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735) wrote:
Dig. This teases more interest, I'd very much like to see further works; possibly extended works. Keep it up, good stuff.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2019, Chelsey Elaine
(79) wrote:
This just so happens to be only a small part of a bigger piece. In time xox
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On Monday, February 25, 2019, Commander_Cadaver
(245) wrote:
Four powerful lines and a way to make an entrance. Welcome.