It bleeds

By Jonas Robinson

In muddy sands
Gray as Winter skies
Yet, with a warm breeze
A cigarette on the beech

Though, mermaid as you come
In wet sands and morning gleam
Our sunrise doth bleed

It bleeds - It bleeds
And with every angel laughing
Every ghost awaiting
Even peaceful nudity
It bleeds - It bleeds

It gets colder, and misty
Every humid molecule
Burns this city we once planned
And it bleeds - It bleeds
It bleeds out to the seas

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Published on Tuesday, July 31, 2018. Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Thank you for reading. Please read my other works.

Comments on "It bleeds"

A former member wrote: This has a great flow. It reads with ease. I personally like â€œitâ€ in poems. It sometimes is hard to define but itâ€™s your and itâ€™s mine. And itâ€™s what we all share. Nice work.
On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Awesome. Thanks for your feedback. :)
A former member wrote: This is absolutely stunning ink. Bravo ðŸ‘
On Thursday, August 2, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Thank you.
On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Your praise is very complimentary. :)
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Smiles (55) wrote:

What can I say that Dan hasn't summed up far more eloquently than I could? You're fantastic Jonas.
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Thank you.
A former member wrote: Very well written my friend!
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Thank you.
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Tagen (112) wrote:

Perfect ten hands down.
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Thank you.
On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

I'm very flattered. :)
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, dwells (4177) wrote:

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, and salt to salt perhaps. Like the time doth bleed away until only the pale husks of memories remain. Cheers my friend and you have expertly combined nature with humanity here. Cheers! - Dan
On Wednesday, August 1, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Thank you.
On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

Your profound interpretation is complimentary and always welcome. :)