...Fractures of Ambivalence

By SolApathy

Fell through a crack of the universes’ demise
Buried my sorrows within a moon felt tide
I drift upon the winds of a change never to be
Sweltering in the war of emotions in me
I lay upon the salty shore of tears, evermore
Barren of comfort, chaos thrives
Yet I lay calmly upon the sand
A statue of picturesque mayhem
Solidified by the torments of time
 
 
 
Stillness
 
 
 
Drawing a name to these parched lips
Too long without a kiss

Stone cracks permeate my soul
Tongue dances with a lock-jaw whisper
My gritty surface silently whimpers
Broken soul exposed
Feel the heat as my rage burns deep
Exposed to the surface-- emotions unchecked
A day the universe regrets

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© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Sunday, November 19, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...In the ambiance of unchecked thoughts I found what my ambivalence has wrought...
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  • A former member wrote: The second stanza slays this amazing poem. In some ways this cuts like a double edged sword; with the darkness on the surface, but a passionate and heated kiss beneath the waves of raging humanity. Just beautiful, dearest. Rebs:).

  • Dimensions On Monday, November 20, 2017, Dimensions (94)By person wrote:

    Powerful and vivid. Amazing work.

  • dwells On Monday, November 20, 2017, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    The closing was colossal and who can say "what dreams may come" (Wm. S.) I don't care what my ambivalence has wrought, is a very neat thought turned inside out. Cheers my friend! - Dan

  • Just Dave On Monday, November 20, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    Tongue dances with a lock-jaw whisper ---- Great line in a fine poem. Great rhythm too. JD

  • Drea On Sunday, November 19, 2017, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    Different, but the same. I can defiantly see that. It's still classic Sol.


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