Log In
...Fractures of Ambivalence
By SolApathy
Fell through a crack of the universes’
demise
Buried my sorrows within a moon felt tide
I drift upon the winds of a change never to be
Sweltering in the war of emotions in me
I lay upon the salty shore of tears, evermore
Barren of comfort, chaos thrives
Yet I lay calmly upon the sand
A statue of picturesque mayhem
Solidified by the torments of time
Stillness
Drawing a name to these parched lips
Too long without a kiss
Stone cracks permeate my soul
Tongue dances with a lock-jaw whisper
My gritty surface silently whimpers
Broken soul exposed
Feel the heat as my rage burns deep
Exposed to the surface-- emotions unchecked
A day the universe regrets
Buried my sorrows within a moon felt tide
I drift upon the winds of a change never to be
Sweltering in the war of emotions in me
I lay upon the salty shore of tears, evermore
Barren of comfort, chaos thrives
Yet I lay calmly upon the sand
A statue of picturesque mayhem
Solidified by the torments of time
Stillness
Drawing a name to these parched lips
Too long without a kiss
Stone cracks permeate my soul
Tongue dances with a lock-jaw whisper
My gritty surface silently whimpers
Broken soul exposed
Feel the heat as my rage burns deep
Exposed to the surface-- emotions unchecked
A day the universe regrets
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Sunday, November 19, 2017.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
...In the ambiance of unchecked thoughts I found what my ambivalence has wrought...Comments on "...Fractures of Ambivalence "
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
The second stanza slays this amazing poem. In some ways this cuts like a double edged sword; with the darkness on the surface, but a passionate and heated kiss beneath the waves of raging humanity. Just beautiful, dearest. Rebs:).
-
On Monday, November 20, 2017, Dimensions
(95)
wrote:
Powerful and vivid. Amazing work.
-
On Monday, November 20, 2017, dwells
(4285) wrote:
The closing was colossal and who can say "what dreams may come" (Wm. S.) I don't care what my ambivalence has wrought, is a very neat thought turned inside out. Cheers my friend! - Dan
-
On Monday, November 20, 2017, Just Dave
(457) wrote:
Tongue dances with a lock-jaw whisper ---- Great line in a fine poem. Great rhythm too. JD
-
On Sunday, November 19, 2017, Drea
(1443) wrote:
Different, but the same. I can defiantly see that. It's still classic Sol.
SolApathy's Latest Works Feed
Join