The Broken Day

By molock

I saw the promise of
tomorrow,
in some far away
place...
Two suns in the
sunset,
and the end of
the human race.

Right on time,
shadows move when
darkness chases the
light...
So I'll meet you on the
other side,
where angels
are given wings to
fly...

Tomorrow we rebuild
love
burying sorrow,
while weaving circles
around the sun.

From the shambles of
Saturn,
we walk through the open
gate.
Where the Phoenix rises
from out of the flickering
flames
....Only to carry the fire
across the broken day.

Right on time,
shadows move when
darkness chases the
light...
So I'll meet you on the
other side,
where angels are given
wings to fly...

Tomorrow we rebuild
love
burying sorrw,
while weaving circles
around the sun....

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Published on Friday, November 10, 2017. Filed under: "Graphic Art"

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Comments on "The Broken Day"

On Thursday, August 23, 2018, Tagen (112) wrote:

So lovely with a beautiful photo, this very much reminded me of Opeth, lol.
On Saturday, January 13, 2018, Just Dave (448) wrote:

Superb poem. Love the artwork too. Nicely done. JD
A former member wrote: The last stanza really ties this lovely write up in a beautiful bow. That being said, the photograph is what really grabbed my attention. I absolutely adore the reds and the breathtaking fire. Very nicely done, darlin'. Rebs:).
On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (312) wrote:

thanks for the kind words Rebs, i looked at dozens of images i knew this was the one as soon as i saw it. peace brother - m0
On Saturday, November 11, 2017, Lazarus Ominous (93) wrote:

Beautifully written and brilliantly executed! Lazarus Ominous
On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (312) wrote:

thank you so much for reading and commenting i'm glad you liked it peace Laz - m0
On Saturday, November 11, 2017, dwells (4177) wrote:

A man after my own radioactive heart. Welcome back my friend and too bad too many never had the "duck and cover" exercise drills in school. Do we really think that tactical nukes won't usher-in their big brothers I wonder? Write on and cheers! Dan
On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (312) wrote:

your comments always put a smile on my face dwells. i still watch those videos on youtube i get a kick out of them. God bless my brother - m0
On Saturday, November 11, 2017, Drea (1388) wrote:

I've missed your words. Missed the lyrical way you write. This was hopeful, but it also breaks my heart. Write on. Hopefully it helps, sir.
On Monday, November 13, 2017, molock (312) wrote:

thank you Drea your always so kind. you will always be one of my favorites here. i agree this a heartbreaking subject, humanity has so much more to offer. later sis - m0
On Saturday, November 11, 2017, worm (1149) wrote:

I like the hopeful stance of this piece... Kudos! ~worm~