Dragon rolls and gratitude
By Adagios
The sleep of the damned
Presence not absence
Lovers face in my hand
Hovels turned to a palace
Dooms created for me
Frankenstein futures
Chances sprout from this tree
Tree of life not of malice
My souls Infirmities
Held at bay by loves lattice
The lamp of your smile
Tethers feet as if ballast
Greeting “heart-day” with grins
Scarred but not callous
shining light from within
Accepting loves challenge
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© 2022 Adagios
Published on Tuesday, February 14, 2017.
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Author's Note:
While waiting at Miguel's Sushi for an unexpected V-day lunch dateAwards
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On Saturday, February 25, 2017, dwells
(4177) wrote:
A hopeful and harmonious outlook is always helpful as you say so well here my friend A. Scarred but not callous; aren't we all - cheers! - Dan
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A former member wrote:
I am so glad to hear that the date went well! Reb:).
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2017, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
The journey within, very well in expressing and moving through these thoughts. Loved it.
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Thk u very much mylissa
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
I, too, find myself writing things down while waiting on people- Or, really, tapping words into my phone. This is far too positive a poem for my taste, but I think you approach the topic with maturity and maintain a great tone through out the piece with the use of excellent figurative language and not necessarily coming out and saying what you're writing about. So, yeah... Still good stuff. Hope the date went well.
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
haha appriciate all the feedback my friend. yes was a very enjoyable lunch (despite her being 25 minutes late). Deep thks Q
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, HereComesThePain
(14) wrote:
yes challenges worth every risk
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
verily, in full agreement. thk u.
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A former member wrote:
I'm sure that she will find you handsome and sweet. Calm your nerves, my sweet friend! Reb:).
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
lol, thk you dear! (it said scarred not scared). Hugs!