...Storms of the soul

By SolApathy

We aren’t that far apart
Always in my heart
Though I’ve moved on
Gone
 Beyond the grave
Don’t feel you couldn’t save
Me
From myself and I
From this world
In which all I did was
Cry
From the day I was born
Forlorn & out of control
Too deep for this world
My soul
Lost in an existence I couldn’t strive
Overload of feelings inside
Psychiatrists and drugs
Dulling my humanity until it was

…Numb
I ran to the sink
Dumping the pills That brought me to the brink
 being unable to think
Alone in my thoughts you didn’t know
I dumped the pills and let
…Go 

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© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Friday, January 20, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Saturday, January 21, 2017, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    As I'm fond to say, but feel it's worth repeating here SA: troubled souls are a reason to rejoice (in an odd way) - not everybody has one my friend. Too bad the people who mean the most to us will always have that lingering doubt, that we have placed there, but we go on. Cheers darkly! - Dan

  • out there On Saturday, January 21, 2017, out there (166)By person wrote:

    can so relate. you express it well. Nicely done Sol.

  • SolApathy On Friday, January 20, 2017, SolApathy (652)By person wrote:

    ...Sometimes you need to dump the pills, if only to remember how it is to...Feel

  • Allen On Friday, January 20, 2017, Allen (156)By person wrote:

    Pills and letting go. Ive done that before my friend. This was indeed dark but very well written. "Too deep for this world" i like that. I think alot can relate

  • 10 Forty Three On Friday, January 20, 2017, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    This one really got to me. I feel very similarly. The ending could be interpreted in several ways. Fine write, Sol. - 10:43


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