The Ghost of Christmas Past
By Adagios
The hauntings have returned,
borne on a frigid wind,
nightly visits urged,
distillment of what’s been,
Ebenezer screwed,
by memory and gin,
recalling presently,
the present of our sins,
all tressed up in a bow,
my hopes infused therein,
waking nights recalled,
why did we let it end?
long before the scars,
consumed our fragile light,
when one became a dozen,
and a dime our valued flight,
long before dishonesty,
and lies consumed young dreams,
when I was sun and noontide,
dancing with your lunar beams,
now a cache of memory,
and accolades proxy,
for a maiden whom still haunts,
and nightmares of what could be,
and in the prison of the now,
are nightly trances thus?
a beacon from your heart to mine,
or worshipping the dust,
i fear to know and fearing,
stifles study of this type,
but in the slumber hours i wonder
does your heart alight?
Somewhere in the southern deserts
I’m calling your name,
answered only by coyote's
...adagio refrain.
Author's Note:
fair is fair, Q suggested the original format was harder on the eyes and after trying the other, it is better in this (stanza) format. cheers.Comments on "The Ghost of Christmas Past"
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A former member wrote:
A new take on a classic tale of the past coming back to haunt in a real way at the worst possible time. I also like how you incorporated your name in the last line here. Very clever, yet gripping. Reb:).
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On Thursday, December 8, 2016, dwells
(4177) wrote:
This just kept on building into something grand; beyond the regrets and reminiscence of what once was but, will be no more. We move on and in hindsight, can only have those torturous second thoughts. Recommend "Maud Muller" by John Greenleaf Whittier, if not already familiar A. Both leave me in a place I know well, but we make our beds and move on. Cheers! - Dan
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On Friday, December 9, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Always appreciate your take on things Dan, I haven't read that but I'm up for some winter reading, I'll def check that out. Cheers!
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
May I ask why you chose to present this poem as a block of text rather than as stanzas? I liked the poem, but I kept getting lost while reading it.
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
lol, fair enuf. i think i wrote it in more of a rapid pace, no revision, only rewrote the last line, so the experience of it was more of a stream of consciousness write.
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On Sunday, December 4, 2016, Queazenart
(200) wrote:
The stream of consciousness style comes out even more so in the classic poetic style, I think. I certainly was able to follow along better. Well done, Adagios.