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inertia
By Jonas
we change faces
and the places we've been
feel the bending
pressures of dialating iris and lost
acceptance of things that control has left
have been and gone
under
like monoxide tied blood
i've never in my life been doing
much more than staring at the sea
as the waves sud the salt of the earth
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Copyright 2003 iasc_dubh
Published on Tuesday, September 16, 2003.
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On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, Anth
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wrote:
that first verse played on the fibres strung of my mind,a kind of distant yet familiar tune,the thought behind that verse,just mesmerising
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
Wow...I agree, the imagery is complex like a finely aged wine...excellent.
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
I had to read this about 10 times before I could comment on it. The last 4 lines just left me in awe of you. This poem has roots that extend into the very nature and fabric of our existence.
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
i completely agree. thought-provoking.. left me feeling so much. every poem of yours i feel the need of coming back to.
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