~Realization~

By Crystal Passion

Yes, today was indeed a day of learning…

Pondering the newly discovered inequities of our relationship
Heaven’s tears shower me like a thousand wet kisses…

As the lone warrior makes her way home
From her final battle with love
She, I, struck the awareness cove,
like a prospector strikes a vein of gold…

Yet knowledge itself is even more priceless than gold
More valuable than any jewel, any luxury, and even you…

Today I realized…

…Tears I once cried for you…

…are now cried for me…

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Published on Tuesday, September 16, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "~Realization~"

On Friday, September 10, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

A pleasant representation...
On Saturday, July 3, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

i loved the 3rd stanza...very original & well-written. awesome. -MeL-
On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

Very Good. Keep it up!
On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, worm (1149) wrote:

a pleasant read and an altogether great poem... nice write!
A former member wrote: Yeah it's nice to be wanted so bad by another that they are moved to tears for your want in return. Did I phrase that right? left?
On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, _Andrew_ (245) wrote:

beautiful write kryz... you're right, my tears do flow for you this particular moment :( *~*aNDReW*~*
On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

........ *deep deep sigh*
On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Raze Drake (85) wrote:

title caught my eyes. good write.
On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55) wrote:

very nice piece, its funny how this world turns things around on people, thanks for sharing