Cunning Waltz

By Nimue44

"Stay, stay!
I hold your hand, your lifetime,
you keep your will, your last stand."

That is what leaves still do chant
in their starred withered land.

They whirl and stir, with the sharp
northern wind that creeps.
They tumble
and crumble
with the wind
that mumbles.
They will demonize
their newly drawn broken scars.

They will realize
that time and wind 
are cunning thieves.

And they dance, they dance,
to the autumn waltz.

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Copyright 2014 Nimue44
Published on Thursday, December 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • whisperingwalls On Sunday, December 14, 2014, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    "They will realize that time and wind are cunning thieves." Enthralling work, pristine flow that allows the content to mesmerize

  • Nimue44 On Wednesday, December 24, 2014, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much.

  • A former member wrote: Nothing can withstand an eternity of being worn down. Nice write.

  • Nimue44 On Friday, December 12, 2014, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Your comment would even fit in the poem. I thank you. I'll write it down and keep it in my pocket.

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