A Songbird at Five

By Virgils Vigil




The first bird sings at five.


A sole song sung from forgiving lungs.

A tranquil tune tantalizes the fading moon.
A sonic wisp summons future forth.





Sing to us—

Let us feel waves of tomorrows—

Tomorrows

And tomorrows forever



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Copyright 2013 Virgils Vigil
Published on Friday, April 26, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Friday, April 26, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...right on schedule, a song to welcome the weary...

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Friday, April 26, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    I love to hear the birds sing.... their songs are a turning point for the day and a promise of a new tomorrow.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: A songbird trilling melodies of new tomorrows. Hopeful. Wistful. Really nice... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I like the contrast you draw in the last, two lines; A tranquil tune juxtaposed to a sonic wisp. Plus, you contrast between the passing night and future day. Scholar

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