surrounded by infinity

By megaprime81

surrounded by infinite void
spinning and crashing into objects
scattered around my room
searching for
someone
seeking like a missile
sanguine in color
staying close
sobbing
softly
some day i'll be more

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Published on Wednesday, March 12, 2014. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I tried to stick to every line starting with an s.

Comments on "surrounded by infinity"

On Thursday, March 13, 2014, Alchemist (679) wrote:

I really like the first three lines but then the rest just seems a little too woe is me. None the less I liked the write.
On Friday, March 14, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you. I appreciate the criticism, as it helps me to understand what others perceive that i might not realize.
On Wednesday, March 12, 2014, Ortolan (214) wrote:

Pretty creative idea.A challenge to make it work.Good job though.
On Thursday, March 13, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
On Wednesday, March 12, 2014, blue angel (866) wrote:

The form works well with the s's .. :) Nice write*
On Thursday, March 13, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.