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surrounded by infinity
By megaprime81
surrounded by infinite void
spinning and crashing into objects
scattered around my room
searching for
someone
seeking like a missile
sanguine in color
staying close
sobbing
softly
some day i'll be more
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Wednesday, March 12, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I tried to stick to every line starting with an s.Comments on "surrounded by infinity"
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On Thursday, March 13, 2014, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
I really like the first three lines but then the rest just seems a little too woe is me. None the less I liked the write.
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On Friday, March 14, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. I appreciate the criticism, as it helps me to understand what others perceive that i might not realize.
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2014, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Pretty creative idea.A challenge to make it work.Good job though.
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On Thursday, March 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
The form works well with the s's .. :) Nice write*
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On Thursday, March 13, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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