Eclipsing the Silence

By megaprime81

Noise comes crackin' early
Hopin' for home
More and more it
  eclipses the silence
And is all the more
  deafening

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Wednesday, January 29, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

It's hard for me to find descriptive words for this poem.
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  • soul_versing On Friday, January 31, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I see it as this... We look for the very things to fulfill us; however, not much satisfaction is gained through the very things we hoped would fulfill us, in return we mute it out. Damn you Jerry! Let the bitches fight on stage and remove those rent-a-cops. Sorry... I'm distracted. ;) ha! Bows- Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 30, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...traffic, blaring tv's, crowds (all those freakin people!), bells, whistles, sirens... make it hard to write, abt anything. so you write abt that...

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, January 30, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Yeah, pretty much. Thank you.


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