Sol and Luna
By megaprime81
Sol and Luna dance
in unison
Cheek to cheek
And heart to heart
Each in proper placement
They whirl and twirl
Not just for admiration
They are related to the cause of time
A heart once torn apart
It seems is on the mend now
Encoded trace of their romance
They're no longer blue now
To tear apart you shouldn't start
If you have no idea how to do it
Phase one and two
Don't be so blue
Just let them dance at their own pace
If you don't you'll destroy man's entire race
And leave it dead from toe to head
Don't rend it under foot
Don't target any fools
Or you'll become one
Right from the start
You said, "I shot just one"
I took your gun and blew your brains out
Entranced with Mars and French bazaars
Drove it off a cliff
You were stiff
And you deserved it
Your ignorance is easy to see
Sun and Moon immortal in eternity
Dummy
No weapon forged
Can interfere
With the love of Sol
And Luna
Author's Note:
Entrance by your spirti, Luna.Comments on "Sol and Luna"
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On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Enchanting dance it is, indeed. Admiring from afar, may seem bazaar. But from where I stand, understanding is on high demand. I love the depth of this one and finding the right words is challenging me. Thank you for sharing :)~
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On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you; words aren't always easy to supply--usually i change the first thing that comes to mind to something else that says it better.
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A former member wrote:
Very nice. 10
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On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Monday, December 16, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Mars and French bazaars - perfectly perfect MP. Your synopsis was legendary and much enjoyed the transition here with a warning. We tamper at our own peril, cheers!
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On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you.