"Loser on Main Street"

By megaprime81

Down an' out
Hometown burnout
Drifting from place to place
How do you erase
40 years of disappointment
Without some sorta annointment
Salve, bleach, or ointment?

When I dared to dream
I was scarred
(I) awoke a retard
Fatally wounded, 
I pulled the Death card
And it shattered m y brain
A lot like Cobain
Sing the busted refrain
If you ever come back again

I'm sending you back
I'm sending you back
'Cuz you ain't down 
With the black
My present--what a present I got
Noothing but sewer-soul rot
You wouldn't be so whack
If only you'd stop smoking crack
You might be immortal
If you'll ente the portal
Ignoring where it goes

Join me on my journey
But please don't disappoint me
We belong not here
Yet we should occasion no fear
As we race for the door
With no care where it goes

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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Thursday, October 31, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Hope this wild goose takes off.
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  • dwells On Friday, November 1, 2013, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Haven't heard "occasion" used as a verb in ages, well done MP! The ending left me a bit flat; wishing for more. An overall excellent effort with a catchy, if offbeat rhythm I enjoyed - you seem familiar? Cheers!

  • megaprime81 On Saturday, November 2, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I thank you. Right now my vision is really blurry. Soemtimes i have to deal with that heile reading, and reading is one of my favorite activities. I have submitted poetry to dp before. I've ;left a few clues to my identit in certain places, but who i am isn't important; poetry and wording are.

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, October 31, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    lol. That's good. I wasn't out to write an anthem, but thank you.


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