"beautiful angel"--a haiku

By megaprime81

She is an angel
A vision of lovliness
How I feel's unknown

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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Saturday, October 26, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My 2nd haiku. Hope it fares well.
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  • A former member wrote: Well they say you regret the things you don't do more than the things you do, but there is something to be said about the feeling itself.

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • dwells On Saturday, November 30, 2013, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    In a word perhaps "entranced" or maybe "enraptured", or pick another "en" word if you like. Some of those books have very glossy covers, cheers!

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A soulless dark angel On Thursday, November 28, 2013, A soulless dark angel (35)By person wrote:

    Why don't you tell her how you feel. If your close to her, or was, it might help alot.

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: This is so lovely and sits comfortably within my heart.

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: I don't exist in Her world... One of the worste places to be. These few words say alot

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • blue angel On Friday, November 22, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    Beautiful angel, indeed :)~

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Friday, November 22, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    I like this, it seems a bit ambiguous, but I think that gives a certain feel to it.. a good feel... Nice write :)

  • megaprime81 On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Thank you.


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