"beautiful angel"--a haiku

She is an angel
A vision of lovliness
How I feel's unknown

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Published on Saturday, October 26, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

My 2nd haiku. Hope it fares well.

Comments on ""beautiful angel"--a haiku"

A former member wrote: Well they say you regret the things you don't do more than the things you do, but there is something to be said about the feeling itself.
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
On Saturday, November 30, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

In a word perhaps "entranced" or maybe "enraptured", or pick another "en" word if you like. Some of those books have very glossy covers, cheers!
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
On Thursday, November 28, 2013, A soulless dark angel (35) wrote:

Why don't you tell her how you feel. If your close to her, or was, it might help alot.
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
A former member wrote: This is so lovely and sits comfortably within my heart.
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
A former member wrote: I don't exist in Her world... One of the worste places to be. These few words say alot
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
On Friday, November 22, 2013, blue angel (866) wrote:

Beautiful angel, indeed :)~
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.
On Friday, November 22, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273) wrote:

I like this, it seems a bit ambiguous, but I think that gives a certain feel to it.. a good feel... Nice write :)
On Monday, December 30, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Thank you.