I Bite Back..(Dont push me)

By A Velvet Tongue

Dont Push me...

I bite back

Dont Unnerve me

I attack

I am not meak
nor am I sweet

I'll grind you like a
piece of meat

Keep your bullshit
in your head

My wit will tear you
up in shreads


Keep your hands
To yourself

I am a hazzard
to your health



So you see..

Not much is lost...

as long
as you don't
piss me off


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Copyright 2003 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Saturday, August 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • thelostmessenger On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, thelostmessenger (110)By person wrote:

    yeaaah. dont we know it... flippin' sweet. *messenger

  • flying_fox On Friday, February 27, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay cool Vel. Love it. I am going to put "Keep your bullshit in your head My wit will tear you up in shreds" up on my front door. Great stuff. FF

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Anthem for all the bitches out there who know it. Love this poem!

  • A former member wrote: i'll push what i please. if i feel the need.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, September 26, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    and rest assured...I'll bite back!!

  • OLd SouL On Friday, August 22, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I'm just a nibbler haha. Great job once again.

  • A former member wrote: I don't bite, for I have lost my teeth. So I gum! *smiles a toothless smile*

  • angelunderneath On Thursday, August 21, 2003, angelunderneath (60)By person wrote:

    lol!!!!!!! I love it!

  • _Andrew_ On Sunday, August 17, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    LOL, omg this is is crazy, you're works never have a based emotion, always different, and always excellently expressed, and uniquely expressed, im likin the way you write *~*aNDReW*~*

  • A former member wrote: If I somehow piss you off would you please send me an "I'm going to kill you" notice so that I have time to run a few steps first? Great poem. ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • Six-Out On Sunday, August 17, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Hmm....I don't like you! :)

  • Ravenblade On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    heheheh, I like it, but if you bite I might be that much more tempted to piss you off...hehehehe, good write

  • A former member wrote: heh...bite marks...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, September 26, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Damn, I miss you already...*sighs*

  • Demosthenes On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    its not a sex pome! yaaaay! im so proud. feel better Love. i bit brian in the fourth grade... *wanders off* -B

  • DarkAyla On Saturday, August 16, 2003, DarkAyla (51)By person wrote:

    Hey! I bite too! I like it...Very good.

  • Ophelia On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    This is a little different, but I like the fact you are expressing anger, and doing a good job of it............O.

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