Paragon Un-World
By DoctorAsh
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Every time we are born
every
time we wake
we re-enter the familiar obscurity ------ of ourselves
as a species
passing in and out
of this
phenomena
of reality
so we travel
and we search
and we move
like herds of fish
in the same direction
in which
we most clearly see
so see
yourself
in others
instead
of bleeding
yourself
on me
.
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Copyright 2013 Daniel Bepristis
Published on Wednesday, February 20, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Very interesting view. I had to stop and crash the 2nd stanza. Nice done.
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A former member wrote:
Perfect way to end it, cheers
~Rich
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A former member wrote:
The period says it all. Hehe...the common herd as fish, a new take on cows. Mmm..."passing in and out of this phenomenal of reality"...indeed, that. Good work, honest and forthright.
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A former member wrote:
*drools......*
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
Wow...I have missed reading your concepts of thought through words...this, though short, packs the metaphorical punch of a heavyweight...ending is very strong.
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A former member wrote:
an unveiling. you always remind me to keep my mind and ears open. that last stanza is dynamic.
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On Thursday, February 21, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
All part of the same, and yet separate, well said with a strong finish! Perhaps school of fish, or not? THanks.
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A former member wrote:
A sharp reflection...introspection with a bite...I am accustomed. Reality resides within our perceptions. Always good to see a longtimer post. Thanks for the thought.