Mind

By FearlessDragon

Lie in wake
Statue eyes
Frozen in melancholy

Bleeding heart
Thumping so loudly

Cold sweat
Dripping
Down my cheek

Shadows dance for me
Whispering
Enchanting things

Moonlight weeping
Its visage
Haunting

Starlight burning
So far away
I wish I could join them

Whistling wind
Singing my tune
To deafened ears


All nature abandoned...


ENTER THE MIND...


... This is where we lose ourselves






Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2013 FearlessDragon
Published on Thursday, January 3, 2013.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Mind"

Log in to post comments.
  • Nehema On Friday, January 4, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    I love the idea that the mind is not natural, not of nature. Considering as humans we have this great aptitude of being able to think outside of survival, we are not part of the Earth's natural food chain, so the thing that separates us must be 'unnatural' - XXOO Scholar

  • Stephanie Sideways On Friday, January 4, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Short, succinct stanza, that reflect your melancholy with ample impact. You seem for a moment tempted by nature but then think better of it at the end. It's like you are walking through the corridors of natures' back stage, then stepping through the the curtains, into your mind, where your performance will begin. ( gosh don't I go on) x

  • FearlessDragon On Friday, January 4, 2013, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    Wow! There you go making me think again ;) ... It is great to see how others interpret our works, I love it! Thank you Stephy

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, January 3, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome pen my friend.

Contribution Level

FearlessDragon's Favorite Poets
FearlessDragon's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.