Tell Me

By A Velvet Tongue

Tell me
I need to hear those 3 words

No no, not of love

I want you..

Is it bashfulness
that padlocks your tongue
yet grows tight in your jeans?

breathing
pulsing
throbbing

Is it uncertainty
of the response I'll give
when those words rape my lobes?

Honest
Blunt
Free

Is it regret
That you lay with another
Yet still find you dream of me

Fantasy
Temptation
Craving

Is it that inflamed ego
Keeping you from releasing
The words I read within one sweeping glance

Sizing
Capturing
Blazing


Tell me you want me
throw caution to the wind
and hold on tight


The sunset will pale
When you utter those 3 words

In me you shall have

Your paradise












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Copyright 2003 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Friday, July 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 19, 2013, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Oh, the lust and desire! Wonderful stirring piece.

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Thursday, June 2, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    You will never know how much I love you for your talent!!Def FAVES!--Steph

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    Inquiring, analyzing, coaxing...rewarding. Wonderful series of events that happen in only questions. Rather unique...don't think I've ever seen it done before...and sound good! I likes...Alot. ~JMDW~

  • A former member wrote: This is awesome. I must say that it is quite the forward thought, very unusual. :)

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Ya know it's not fair to use psychic powers on me, reading my mind without permission isn't nice. Lovely write.

  • A former member wrote: i love the last line. YOU are naughty!

  • A Velvet Tongue On Thursday, July 31, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    what? me naughty?....nawwww Glad you liked this hun! Thanks!

  • Ophelia On Friday, July 25, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    very very erotic and captivating, I like this...................O.

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