A Murder Of Crows
By darkness falls
A full moon rising, this night has been set aside for those whose
thoughts turn to darkness....
A murder of crows
sit upon the tree branches, silent as the grave, with eyes glowing red.
And it seems as though, indeed, something wicked this way comes. The time
approaches with infinitesmal passage and yet with a haste once feared and
resisted. The very air seems full of electricity and foreboding. Tonight
is the anniversary of the death of a girl, one who cried out for help,
yet was ignored. A girl who, one hundred years ago this very night was
taken from her home and used for the sport of soldiers come victorious
from another land, and cared not for who they hurt. Her cries ignored by
her own townsfolk, afraid for their own lives. Better her, they thought,
than they themselves or one of theirs, and when the drunken soldiers had
finished with her, they left her for dead on that chill All Hallows Eve
and went back to their drink and ill-gotten gains.
But this
poor, brave girl was not dead, although she wished it now, so taking a
snoring soldiers dagger from its sheath she began to walk down the road
away from the town. This town where she was born, and had lived her entire
seventeen summers. Her face a mask, dagger held at her side, she took the
path that led through the forest and into a moonlit meadow where she had
come often before to sit and think of life and dream of how things might
be for her in the future. But now the dreams are gone, cast away like chaff,
and she reaches the stone in the center of the clearing.
Her eyes begin to glow with a luminous, hellish light and as she climbs
atop the stone she begins, softly at first, then louder an unintelligible
chant which rises and falls on the gentle night wind. She grasps the blade,
pulling it through her palm 'til the blood flows, and using her fingers
begins to draw the ancient runes on the stone. Casting away her ruined
dress, she now draws on her body, and finally, she lays down on the stone
face up, the moon lighting the tracks of the tears down her cheeks. Another
soft chant and then she raises the dagger and plunges it into her breast.
Her body arches, and with both hands she twists the knife. A soft moan
escapes her lips, and then with a gentle smile her hands release the dagger
and fall, lifeless, to her sides and the light in her eyes slowly fades
to black.
The meadow is deathly silent, no wind or animal
sounds to be heard, only the steady drip, drip, drip of the blood flowing
from her body. And then the bright moonlight begins to fade as a cloud
floats across, and then another and another until the sky is pitch black.
The wind begins to rise, moaning ominously through the trees, a far-off
rumble, then another, closer, and suddenly lightning crashes in the meadow,
blinding in its intensity. In the afterglow the girls' body is gone, only
the runes on the rock remain.
The soldiers encampment is
less than a mile away, those who had raided the tavern and terrorized the
townsfolk having retrurned to sleep away their drunkenness and dream of
more plunder and evil as their future paths dictate, the guards are losing
their battle with sleep, even the horses are quiet, standing with their
heads low.
Then, as though all the hounds of Hell are at the door,
the wraiths take their promised vengeance. Tents are shredded, man and
beast alike are torn limb from limb, swords broken and armor crushed like
tin until everything is but a gory wasteland where death and destruction
is all that can be seen. Silently, the wraiths slip back into the forest
from whence they came, and a short distance away a final bolt of lightning
strikes the tavern, blowing it into a thousand flaming shards which light
the other structures in the town....
The rider examines
the place in the early morning light for signs of survivors of what appeared
to be a terrible fire, but he finds no one alive. Riding on, he comes to
the encampment and in awe, sickened by the sight of utter destruction he
spurs his horse on, and loses himself in a fugue. Waking, he finds his
horse has stopped in a beautiful meadow near a large, flat rock in the
center. The rock is still wet from the morning dew and he does not see
the runes, but he spots the dagger and picks it up. Immediately a terrible
vision invades his mind, he sees it all, and before he can drop the dagger
it takes him, stealing his mind for its own, and the luminous light returns,
now in his eyes. He shoves the dagger into his belt and turns his horse
back in the direction of the main army column that he saw two days earlier
fifty miles to the north...
The stll-silent murder of crows
watch him depart with their shining red eyes...
Author's Note:
Somewhere in an Ireland of long ago...Comments on "A Murder Of Crows"
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Quite the tale well-told, this was indeed epic, thanks DF, it was worth the wait!
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A former member wrote:
Ur title is a really good Cuba Gooding Jr. movie :P
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On Monday, April 30, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Awe.. Beautifully written.. hello there strangerl. long time no see,,
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On Monday, April 30, 2012, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
Hi Beautiful, I'm still alive, life has just gotten really hectic, so not as much time as I'd like to be here, hope everything is good where you are...
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On Monday, April 30, 2012, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
Crow Jane . . . Crow, Crow Jane . . . Please tell me you've heard this song by Nick Cave. And if you have not, you must. You'll like it :)
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On Monday, April 30, 2012, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
I've never heard it, of course that piqued my interest, so I'm listening to it now...I think if I thought of a song as being partly responsible for the inspiration it'd be Kamelots' "The Haunting", but honestly I have no idea where that one came from, I just wrote it. Took me longer to type it up on here ha ha ha...