The Year of the Rabbit

By ruthless48

genetically encoded

self survival dna song

hunter

gatherer

we're our Uncle Neanderthal

and Aunt Cro Magnon

just what was needed to survive

and no more

enough for winter

but, now, what? the entire store?

is our lack of predator

our clamor for personal self pity rights

our soft comfortable way of living

what’s robbed us of our raw prehistoric life?

we hunt far too little

and gather and store well beyond need

when we hunt it is for brother blood

and not ourselves to feed

women for men's hearts to wear like

shrunken heads dangling from string bikinis at the hip

men for more chunks of the earth

as they smile and lie through capped teeth and pursed lips

we should be hungry

feel cold

sleep on the ground

we need to feel thirst

humility

and our sanity will rebound

i wish you to chase a rabbit for dinner

through the forest

switches cutting like your grandmother's spankings when bark peeled bare

i wish you to run, heart pounding

your food, on the run too, that you want to prepare

until your heart is exploding  in your throat

not one more circle as your dinner will dodge and hide

i wish you to drop and sweat as sunlight and sunset collide

then, at the hint of dusk, the rabbit nearby in brush to appear and quietly graze

you in your empty stomach to be filled with angst, frustration and rage

then a calm, as you grab at vegetation and in harmony

you both began to chew

i wish prehistoric values, your modern hypocrisy, to restore and reboot

 

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Copyright 2012 ruthless48
Published on Thursday, April 26, 2012.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

inspired by Chuck Palahniuk ~ Fight Club
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  • ruthless48 On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, ruthless48 (172)By person wrote:

    Thank YOU, Dybbuk! Loved the mind link to Bruno Latour and post modernism. New, but very comfortable place for me! Enjoyed your reflections on the lean, hungry. Maybe the start could be a 'Walden Zone" (time off from tech stuf) great interview by William Powers, author of: Hamlet's Blackberry~ http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=128364111 ~ it's time, thank you again for the imput and the read

  • The Dybbuk On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, The Dybbuk (895)By person wrote:

    heh, there's a lil 'reply' button under the comment that will stagger replies and also, potentially, notify the commentator that the comment was replied to, just and fyi. Skimmed over the interview, interesting, Washington Post writer, huh. I think technology is our mode of evolution... and science is guided by profit... look out future, here we come haha, should be one hell of a ride :) I'm fairly unplugged except for keeping in touch with those who, unfortunately, I cannot. The furry year that hops with floppy ears. :)~

  • ruthless48 On Thursday, June 7, 2012, ruthless48 (172)By person wrote:

    Ramen, said the Pastafarian! I believe science is our stirrup, to saddle up and ride out of the valley of complacent stupidity. Hopefully, we will still be able to have basic survival skills along the way. Totally in sync with science cashing in! Couldn't put finger on intent for harnessing neutrino, until twitter had post on its use for Wallstreet sealing trades miliseconds before others by streaming info on encoded neutrinos directly through the earth, intead of around its surface wirelessly! http://www.forbes.com/sites/brucedorminey/2012/04/30/neutrinos-to-give-high-frequency-traders-the-millisecond-edge/Wallstreet has $ in hand for 1st physicist with plan! Wrote year of the rabbit also because it is my chinese sign. We now don the year of the black water dragon! If that doesn't perfectly describe science, I don't knw what does?!? It will be a heck of a ride! Enchanted interchange. Thank you

  • dwells On Thursday, April 26, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Went bow hunting in the Ocala National Forest. We were going to make a hunter's stew out of small game - but they didn't co-operate and we opted for Burger King when it got dark! Not sure simpler is better, but digging the self-reliance we have lost, thanks.

  • ruthless48 On Friday, April 27, 2012, ruthless48 (172)By person wrote:

    Cool, Dwells. thank you for insight. Are we ever fully fed?

  • Dominic On Thursday, April 26, 2012, Dominic (53)By person wrote:

    Destroy everything? Only then can we start again. Interestingly rendered... considering the inspiration.

  • ruthless48 On Thursday, April 26, 2012, ruthless48 (172)By person wrote:

    Foul deeds will rise, Though all the earth o’erwhelm them, to men’s eyes. Hamlet. ACT I Scene 2. William Shakespeare


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