Touch Brought Back Taste

By XCryingMinotaurX

Cheeks
apple red
Forehead
burning sweat

Eyes
glancing shock
Lips
screaming obscenities

Lust
oozing pores
Love
mending heart

Comatose
inside out
Uncertainty
becoming clear

Deep brown eyes
seeing insides tighten
Poetic unjustified tongue
freestyling sleepless nights
Softest tasting lips
undeniably passionatley inlove

..falling
....fallen
......failed

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Published on Monday, March 22, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Touch Brought Back Taste"

On Friday, June 8, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

how did you just write about how i feel ? (physically and emotionally) poets are ok without oxygen, we can write it in. thank you~ incredible work! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s8hOrhv_VAA
A former member wrote: Loving the way you place words together that surprisingly fit, i would have never thought of it
A former member wrote: a beautiful write
A former member wrote: Great piece. ][ ][
A former member wrote: this def touched the heart! keep up the good work darling!
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, knightmirror (426) wrote:

i,m always amazed by your work.it's ashame you're in so much pain.i said it before and i'll say it again"i wish i could mend your broken heart"much love,chris
On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

the end. it slams me to the floor.
On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

the structure on this is fantastic...such passion in your words is a pleasure to read. I agree with Alanarchy too. Fox
On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Beautiful. The end hurt.
On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, nell (270) wrote:

the one worded lines create a great climax of emotion, great write;)
On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

you're such a powerful structuralist ... really amplifies your beautiful words ... very sweet write ... funguy
On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, AshtrayDirt (31) wrote:

either it was your words or the structure or the moment, er whatever it was point being is that i got some crazy visuals while reading this. good write...it's all about what it invokes in someone. -Dirt