Touch Brought Back Taste

By XCryingMinotaurX

Cheeks
apple red
Forehead
burning sweat

Eyes
glancing shock
Lips
screaming obscenities

Lust
oozing pores
Love
mending heart

Comatose
inside out
Uncertainty
becoming clear

Deep brown eyes
seeing insides tighten
Poetic unjustified tongue
freestyling sleepless nights
Softest tasting lips
undeniably passionatley inlove

..falling
....fallen
......failed




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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Monday, March 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ruthless48 On Friday, June 8, 2012, ruthless48 (169)By person wrote:

    how did you just write about how i feel ? (physically and emotionally) poets are ok without oxygen, we can write it in. thank you~ incredible work! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s8hOrhv_VAA

  • MySoulBare On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, MySoulBare (14)By person wrote:

    Loving the way you place words together that surprisingly fit, i would have never thought of it

  • twistedink123 On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, twistedink123 (19)By person wrote:

    a beautiful write

  • A former member wrote: Great piece. ][ ][

  • A former member wrote: this def touched the heart! keep up the good work darling!

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, knightmirror (432)By person wrote:

    i,m always amazed by your work.it's ashame you're in so much pain.i said it before and i'll say it again"i wish i could mend your broken heart"much love,chris

  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    the end. it slams me to the floor.

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, flying_fox (596)By person wrote:

    the structure on this is fantastic...such passion in your words is a pleasure to read. I agree with Alanarchy too. Fox

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, Alanarchy (1238)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. The end hurt.

  • nell On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, nell (287)By person wrote:

    the one worded lines create a great climax of emotion, great write;)

  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, capt_funguy (807)By person wrote:

    you're such a powerful structuralist ... really amplifies your beautiful words ... very sweet write ... funguy

  • AshtrayDirt On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, AshtrayDirt (33)By person wrote:

    either it was your words or the structure or the moment, er whatever it was point being is that i got some crazy visuals while reading this. good write...it's all about what it invokes in someone. -Dirt

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