Ophelia in the bathtub
By ruthless48
I'm Ophelia in the bathtub
Guilt and sin my heavy robes
that pull me to a muddy death of solace
where you, my Laertes,
all tears fittingly withhold
My head haloed with floating
tresses
Uncertainties are my hand-picked wild flowers
I wait for the wick to kindly extinguish
But rise in a resurrection's
cold water hour
Jealous of death's accidental mermaid lying
beneath
the willow tree
Raising myself, undertermined,
to goosebump's glitter
the reality of being me
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Copyright 2012 ruthless48
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A former member wrote:
AMAZING...best poem of Ophelia I´ve ever read...loved it, loved, it,..LOVED
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Not really familiar with the tale but this was some good poetry, and welcome to DP, you'll fit right in. Feel free to roam and comment.
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, ruthless48
(172) wrote:
thank you for compliment. I really do feel at home here. Finally!
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...nicely written...the Bard would approve..
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, ruthless48
(172) wrote:
thank you & Bard? too