Lost In Zion

By veingo

Which is better, lust or love?
Depends on whom you're speaking of.

We met by chance, and happenstance,
and I felt

Lust In Zion.

She coaxted me out of my thick shell.
Though each befor had tried like hell.

Her shape shift heart, just fit the part
and I lived

Life In Zion.

She always said goodbye two times.
Which paused my heart, untill next time.

Her copper hair, and skin so fair.
I fell in

Love In Zion.

And every girl I've known sinse then
has come up short with out; within.

Oh Natalie, Cara, Brittany, Farron
I'd rather feel

Lost In Zion..

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Published on Saturday, February 18, 2012. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Lost In Zion"

On Thursday, October 4, 2012, Shewolf (25) wrote:

Very nicely done !
On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Nixx (235) wrote:

the four "L's". i like this. once you found something thats different you do just kinda settle after that
A former member wrote: "She always said goodbye two times./Which paused my heart, until next time./Her copper hair, and skin so fair./I fell in Love In Zion." I love this..so beautiful and rhythmic.
On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Rebel tiGer King (239) wrote:

excellent, always a great read, very intense in mellow waves if that makes any sense, good write brother
On Sunday, February 19, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

Bokonon would say "Nice, nice, very nice."
On Sunday, February 19, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

Wonderful, another Vonnegut fan!
On Saturday, February 18, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

This was a marvellously reflective piece on lost love and the eternal quest to re-capture something that perhaps was taken for granted at the time. Live and learn, thanks for stirring some old memories.
A former member wrote: Liked it.......unique
A former member wrote: very nice!!