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Lost In Zion
By veingo
Which is better, lust or love?
Depends on whom you're speaking of.
We met by chance, and happenstance,
and I felt
Lust
In Zion.
She coaxted me out of my thick shell.
Though each befor had tried like hell.
Her shape shift heart,
just fit the part
and I lived
Life In Zion.
She always said goodbye two times.
Which paused my heart,
untill next time.
Her copper hair, and skin so fair.
I
fell in
Love In Zion.
And every girl
I've known sinse then
has come up short with out; within.
Oh Natalie, Cara, Brittany, Farron
I'd rather feel
Lost
In Zion..
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Copyright 2012 veingo
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On Thursday, October 4, 2012, Shewolf
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wrote:
Very nicely done !
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Nixx
(240) wrote:
the four "L's". i like this. once you found something thats different you do just kinda settle after that
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A former member wrote:
"She always said goodbye two times./Which paused my heart, until next time./Her copper hair, and skin so fair./I fell in Love In Zion." I love this..so beautiful and rhythmic.
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
excellent, always a great read, very intense in mellow waves if that makes any sense, good write brother
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
I think both is best too.... Great expression and write Veingo.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
Bokonon would say "Nice, nice, very nice."
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
Wonderful, another Vonnegut fan!
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On Saturday, February 18, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
This was a marvellously reflective piece on lost love and the eternal quest to re-capture something that perhaps was taken for granted at the time. Live and learn, thanks for stirring some old memories.
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A former member wrote:
Liked it.......unique
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A former member wrote:
very nice!!
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