Absolute Oblivion

By HeadpatSlut

Falling down again from the longest high I've known-
I can't go back into depression, I won't return to good ways again-
So far gone and so damn lost I can't begin to imagine anything else-
Staring into shadows rising over me like the tide-


There is no light that's left in me, I'm skinned down to the bone-
I'll throw back on my happy face of cour,e only now and then-
If I try so hard again I'll laugh like Hel when I hurt myself-
Forever living in that moment when my spirit slowly died.

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Copyright 2011 DK6_Marius
Published on Tuesday, November 22, 2011.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I don't want this to be mistaken as being relitave to how I'm feeling, today actually seems like a rather good day for me, but I felt this grpwing in me so I feel as though it was something I had to post, any thoughts?
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  • rosemaiden On Thursday, November 24, 2011, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    perfect description....could really feel it

  • A former member wrote: you just hit everything.

  • dwells On Tuesday, November 22, 2011, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Won't return to the good ways? We all give up those things along the way, that only look good in the rearview mirror. Hope this was cathartic for you - how's the beach today?

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