mother, mother...

By darling93demon

mother, mother,
why do you cry?
is something wrong?
did somebody die?

mother, mother,
why do you drink?
then try to hide it,
and say its not what i think.

mother, mother,
why cant you drive?
is it because you crashed
that night you were high?

mother, mother,
why dont you care?
that i'm always crying
because youre never there.

mother, mother,
where did you go?
i havent seen you
since last march when it snowed.

mother, mother,
will you ever return?
or will you be like father,
poured in an urn.

mother, mother,
up on the shelf,
now that youre gone,
im all by myself.

mother mother,
one lesson is true.
no matter what happens,
i wont be like you.

i will talk to my daughter,
and we will be friends,
i wont make her life hell
til the very end.

i wont steal her money
and i wont pop pills.
i wont sit on my ass
and make her pay all the bills.

so mother, mother,
i'll be nothing like you.
but after everything you've done...
i still love you.





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Copyright 2011 darling93demon
Published on Tuesday, October 11, 2011.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

dedicated to my mother.
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  • Sketso On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Killer in it's simplistic delivery and agonizing ache. Glad I stumbled across this.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I had to read this again.. I wana fav you real bad so i'm goin through all your work as we speak... Scholar

  • darling93demon On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    yayyyyy!!!! :D

  • The_Broken_Fox_2112 On Monday, January 9, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112 (70)By person wrote:

    This almost made me cry. My own "mommy" problems are exactly on this line. I was taught how NOT to act when I have children, when I "grow up" and when I have a life that other's depend on. You an do a great job with writing. Thank you so much for posting!

  • darling93demon On Monday, January 9, 2012, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thank you for reading TBF. :) and glad to know there is someone else that knows what its like.

  • ColorMeToxic On Friday, December 16, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    Very touching... Scholar

  • darling93demon On Sunday, January 8, 2012, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thank you.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I have started a Mommy pitt where we meet and throw them in together.. Broken all over again met me there once ... You shud read her .. she is quite the writter.. I have a few thoughts bout mommy... but I left them in the dungeon that I tossed her in.... Nice write sweety... Scholar

  • darling93demon On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    definately will do. thanks devilish

  • terris crimson On Thursday, October 13, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    i like it.

  • darling93demon On Friday, December 16, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thnx crimson

  • haunted On Wednesday, October 12, 2011, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    damn darling, this was very emotional of you, thanks for sharing. your ryhming scheme is fucking great. your style is keeping me on the edge of my seat. i always say tragic things bring out the strongest, most real raw emotions out of people. and you penned it very well! awesome!

  • darling93demon On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thank you very much haunted :)

  • dwells On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    We can pick our nose, but not our parents - great job with this poignant message, thanks.

  • darling93demon On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    exactly lol. thnaks dwells

  • A former member wrote: This, Poem is absolutely beautiful, I love it.

  • darling93demon On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thanks demon

  • A former member wrote: Beautifly truely beatiful :)

  • darling93demon On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thanks bloodycrazy

  • namelessmadi On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, namelessmadi (34)By person wrote:

    This is exactly how my brother is and how i imagine him....it kills me inside everyday...i understand what are portrying in this, i loved reading it as well. Beautiful work.

  • darling93demon On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    thank you. :)

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