mother, mother...
By darling93demon
mother, mother,
why do you cry?
is something wrong?
did
somebody die?
mother, mother,
why do you drink?
then
try to hide it,
and say its not what i think.
mother,
mother,
why cant you drive?
is it because you crashed
that
night you were high?
mother, mother,
why dont you care?
that i'm always crying
because youre never there.
mother,
mother,
where did you go?
i havent seen you
since last
march when it snowed.
mother, mother,
will you ever
return?
or will you be like father,
poured in an urn.
mother, mother,
up on the shelf,
now that youre gone,
im all by myself.
mother mother,
one lesson is true.
no matter what happens,
i wont be like you.
i will
talk to my daughter,
and we will be friends,
i wont make her
life hell
til the very end.
i wont steal her money
and i wont pop pills.
i wont sit on my ass
and make her pay
all the bills.
so mother, mother,
i'll be nothing like
you.
but after everything you've done...
i still love you.
Author's Note:
dedicated to my mother.Comments on "mother, mother..."
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Sketso
(416) wrote:
Killer in it's simplistic delivery and agonizing ache. Glad I stumbled across this.
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I had to read this again.. I wana fav you real bad so i'm goin through all your work as we speak...
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
yayyyyy!!!! :D
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
This almost made me cry. My own "mommy" problems are exactly on this line. I was taught how NOT to act when I have children, when I "grow up" and when I have a life that other's depend on. You an do a great job with writing. Thank you so much for posting!
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thank you for reading TBF. :) and glad to know there is someone else that knows what its like.
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On Friday, December 16, 2011, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
Very touching...
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On Sunday, January 8, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thank you.
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I have started a Mommy pitt where we meet and throw them in together.. Broken all over again met me there once ... You shud read her .. she is quite the writter.. I have a few thoughts bout mommy... but I left them in the dungeon that I tossed her in.... Nice write sweety...
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
definately will do. thanks devilish
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, terris crimson
(167) wrote:
i like it.
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On Friday, December 16, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thnx crimson
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
damn darling, this was very emotional of you, thanks for sharing. your ryhming scheme is fucking great. your style is keeping me on the edge of my seat. i always say tragic things bring out the strongest, most real raw emotions out of people. and you penned it very well! awesome!
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thank you very much haunted :)
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
We can pick our nose, but not our parents - great job with this poignant message, thanks.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
exactly lol. thnaks dwells
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A former member wrote:
This, Poem is absolutely beautiful, I love it.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thanks demon
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A former member wrote:
Beautifly truely beatiful :)
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On Thursday, October 13, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thanks bloodycrazy
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, namelessmadi
(34) wrote:
This is exactly how my brother is and how i imagine him....it kills me inside everyday...i understand what are portrying in this, i loved reading it as well. Beautiful work.
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2011, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
thank you. :)