(. . .)
By Blood Saga
Here is a picture of
the
edge of civilization:
(You've fallen down a sort of
social rabbit
hole.)
Pavement slick with rain,
harsh white streetlight
turns it into a mirror;
it rained today.
and it will
rain tomorrow.
The concrete will absorb
every drop of water;
struggling grass drinks it up
so it may become green veins.
Of
course, if a tree ever dared
to put down roots, it must pay the price.
The planet is so tired.
Natural order implies control.
Mother Earth has given up,
and so have you.
The phone booth,
oasis of communication,
theoretically connecting
you
with the world beyond these
four narrow glass walls.
You think, tomorrow will be
better because the sky will not
bleed into the ground so much.
Nothing like this thick velvet
night.
The air here is cold and breakable.
Winter. Not
all of us were meant to
survive; the planet rejects humans
like transplanted organs, because it
fears for its own survival.
Comments on "(. . .)"
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On Sunday, October 23, 2011, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
I loved this it was beautiful and raw.
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
It rained today. And it will rain tommorow. Sorry, enjoyed this too much for just one comment XD
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2011, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
You made me Alice. Enjoyed following the white rabbit in this one, thanks for the trip.
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On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Curious comments on the winding down and going out, "not with a bang but a whimper" T.S. Eliot, thanks and nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
this was really very very good! ~ HDL.