angel wings

By the broken

black feathers
skin to bone
child left
all alone

hell is crying
death is allaround
child is dying
on the ground

black wings
angel sings
darkest one
devils fun

nobody
can understand
why innocent blood
is spread on this land

why on the childs back
is what angels lack
and what humanity seems to attack
wings that are so very black



now smile while you hurt

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Sunday, May 8, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • worm On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    I can feel it...

  • Killerdemonchick On Thursday, November 22, 2012, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    Geat write

  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, July 14, 2011, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    The trueness rings loudly in this piece. The world is cruel, and with no reprieve. I love the way you put that into words. Great job. Brava!

  • The Lioness Rampant On Tuesday, June 14, 2011, The Lioness Rampant (40)By person wrote:

    very dark and beautiful i loved every word... very well penned!!

  • A former member wrote: This one is my favorit it is great!!! like all of ur work but, idk this one is my favorit for some reason can't put my finger on it nice job


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