Goodnight Daddy
By xPainfulTears
It was cold tonight.
My blanket had done me no justice.
And something
just didn't feel right...
I started to hear footsteps.
I
quickly looked up too see a man.
He wore a long, black coat and hat.
He slowly began walking to my bed.
The man turned me
over and shook his head.
"Now look what you've made me do." He said.
He then pulled my pants down and spread out my thighs.
I tried
to fight him off... but he was too powerful.
"Please don't..."
I cried.
He only smiled and with force, slid his member directly in
me.
I screamed at the jolt of pain while he laughed.
He then covered my mouth as my screaming and crying got louder.
What
only lasted 9 minutes seemed like an eternity.
He finally pulled
his member out and uncovered my mouth.
"Goodnight, darling."
He said in bitter sarcasm.
I cried harder as I finally choked
out,
"...Goodnight, Daddy."
Comments on "Goodnight Daddy"
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A former member wrote:
Powerful, deep, honest. Best kind of poetry one can find. Well done.
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A former member wrote:
Welcome to dark poetry... Sad but relatable post...
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
wow im so sorry, those 9 minutes can last forever.. heart-breakingly harsh.. im saddened .. welcome to dp!
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, Strataic
(99) wrote:
Wow, such a harsh and sick picture you paint, 9 minutes that last forever. Thank you for sharing....
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
9 minutes can be an eternity - tell mommy, cheers and welcome to DP!
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow, im speechless! this is heart breaking and made me weak and torn. thank you for sharing...its a great poem, you expressed your self very well. does time even heal a wound so deep.