A Balmy Little Rhyme

By Riven Waker

Here is quite a fine treat
And it is such a surprise
Think that it's caviar
When actually it's spiders' eyes

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Copyright 2010 Riven Waker
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I must be daft...
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  • DarkDruidess On Tuesday, December 28, 2010, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    haha...nom nom...spider's eyes...Nice little visual here. And your not daft....

  • ubiquitoussoul On Saturday, August 21, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    That ..sounds tasty..haha spider eyes..how creepy..let me get a spoon full of that..only for the dark

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