By veingo

I want what I miss,

I miss what I want,
you're the only one
who knows what it is.

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© 2008 veingo
Published on Sunday, September 21, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: feels lonesome to me. but i tend to read things that way. thank you for your entry.

  • A former member wrote: Screw them then my friend. :) **hugs**

  • A former member wrote: Damn those who know what it is and don't give it up. This is lovely =)

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, December 13, 2008, Leith Plunkett (239)By person wrote:

    6 lines of pure depth and pleading. Says way more than the lines portray. Awesome piece

  • A former member wrote: what is it now

  • Lylani On Thursday, October 9, 2008, Lylani (116)By person wrote:

    Perfectly simply expressed, if only it was so simple to fill that void.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Wednesday, October 1, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (361)By person wrote:

    The gap that we feel but only they know exactly what it is. But maybe they don't even know, they just are the only ones capable of completing us. As if, in falling in love we allowed them to break us a little, with a shape unique to them, and from then on we are only complete when it is filled. Some of us have more holes than others.

  • Narcissa On Sunday, September 21, 2008, Narcissa (407)By person wrote:

    This feeling I think we all know...and only he/she can fulfill it...damn you hit a sore spot.

  • A former member wrote: *sighs* if i could properly say what this makes me feel i wondered be wiping my eyes right now. perfect mr. magician

  • dark faery On Sunday, September 21, 2008, dark faery (28)By person wrote:

    I can relate to this great write

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, September 21, 2008, Alanarchy (1207)By person wrote:

    This is every thing I want to say, crystalized. Wish I could say it this easily. I always stutter when it comes to this kind of thing. Damn you for writing this. Hits too close.

  • A former member wrote: i agree with everything sharon said. *hugs*

  • A former member wrote: :( I'm so glad to see you writing again and I love the absolute simplicity of this and of most of what you write: so many meanings buried in the simplest words. But....you make me worried at the same time. One of the problems with being friends with a poet you like: when they write their sadness, you worry about them.

  • Mars On Sunday, September 21, 2008, Mars (327)By person wrote:

    i know how you feel right this second. but what i miss, i don't know. what i miss is what i need and want. but that thing..i don't know what it is. -mars Scholar

  • PassionateDarkDesire On Sunday, September 21, 2008, PassionateDarkDesire (28)By person wrote:

    short, simple...and to the point. I like it.

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