Body Rot

By Mistress Morbid

Beauty
F
.
O
.
R
.
E
.
V
.
E
.
R

Swirls of
Blue, Purple, & Red
The color of my love
For you
BrUiSeD & ReFuSeD

Taken InDuLgEd

F.e.e.d
my -fuel-
my -fire-
Flares with
AnGeR
aNgUiSh

Make it *STOP*
Turn it *OFF*
*KILL* the pain

S.T.A.I.N.S
Of crimson b~l~o~o~d
Wont *go away*
*Wash* away

S.T.A.L.E
B.I.T.T.E.R.
& O.L.D
Shrivled into `n`o`t`h`i`n`g`

My FaCaDe may
Be forever
*cracked*
&
*faded*

But
My !.inner beauty.!
Will always *Shine* so bright

With
s
.
p
.
e
.
c
.
k
.
s
Of S.O.R.R.O.W
To *help* me through

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Published on Friday, April 2, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Body Rot"

On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Darkest_Addiction (44) wrote:

i really like the WAY this is written
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, SorrowSoul (54) wrote:

Beautiful work. Aside from this being a great write, the style of the wording really accents this poem.
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Solace (1069) wrote:

To remove myself from the banality of my own current sickness that renders my words a shallow form from what relevence they used to have...Until this sickness eases, I am wordless and humbled...
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Solace (1069) wrote:

Timidly wandering through your words of dismay and yet hope a swirling paradox within itself. I am rendered breathless, numb, anaesthetised by them unable to convey, express response
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

thanks, means alot. =)
On Monday, April 5, 2004, flying_fox (573) wrote:

normally I find uneven cases and gliphs ristracting... but not in this one. You've managed to really use them effectively. BRavo - great stuff. Fox
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, manywalks (750) wrote:

Had to come back and read this again, just to get the fuller effect. Delicious. ~ mw
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, purr_verse (1059) wrote:

lovely visual emphasis; added extra action and evocation... I agree with Lynaes. great work. :)
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, hate_doll (265) wrote:

yesss....very...trippy...i like...i was really hooked, charming...
On Saturday, April 3, 2004, Lynaes (859) wrote:

Oh wow, this was very trippy, I enjoyed the way you've portrayed this.. The image I get from this is sad until "But My !.inner beauty.! Will always *Shine* so bright" gave it an uplifting twist of hope. Amazing work Morb. ~L
On Friday, April 2, 2004, riCOCKulous (19) wrote:

its so... pretty *is amused* ~Noki
On Friday, April 2, 2004, darkangelXlll (108) wrote:

i love it i like the words you used and of course how could i not mention the expectacular (misspell i know) format sweeeet!!!! lol i love this i just do... srry for the mispells here and there its late im tired. ~darlin :)
On Friday, April 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Quite alright =)
A former member wrote: This was dizzying though I'm sure the situation was as well. I think the format on this added something to it, helped the words to drive their point. Wonderfully done:) ~Ryan
On Friday, April 2, 2004, Six-Out (1435) wrote:

Trippy...had me staggering to keep my footing the entire way through. Enchanting write.

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