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Her
By Crystal Passion
I met someone today,
amongst the crowded chaos of my daily itinerary
Insidiously, she hid herself within the confines of the other jaded faces
But compel me she did
So confidently I approached her
Never had I met someone such as her
She is strong as steel
Cunning as a lynx
Mindful and watching as an owl
I had no idea she existed?
Slightly used, but not tained
Somewhat caty, but understanding
This girl who takes my breath away
This girl I?ve waited twenty years to discover.
this girl
I finally
met
is me
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Copyright 2003 Kryztal_Prizon
Published on Tuesday, September 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2017, worm
(1194)
wrote:
Just found this gem again... had to say it's still a relevant piece... ~worm~
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A former member wrote:
Lovely poem
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On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
wow!
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
nice write kryz, hopefully more confidence finds your way *~*aNDReW*~*
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A former member wrote:
I haven't truely met myself. Hmmm! Great poem though.
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
I could have told you that! it's fantastic when you finally realize just how strong a person you really are... yeah!
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
*blushes*
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A former member wrote:
wow!that was a very unexpected ending,i love it!great poem ..xxx...
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
wow...good for you....thats great...
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A former member wrote:
O wow! This poem totally bawled me over! when i read that "is me" at the end the whole thing just grew a strong meaning! It was so unexpected, yet so right. V.well done!
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Forever Cold
(33) wrote:
very suprizeing turn out, but very good..
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
that was uplifting, love those moments when you reflect upon yourself and are quite pleased
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
This is amazing...I enjoyed reading this very much.
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Wohooo.. *Dances* I love awakenings.. And this is a good write. Monkey
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