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Replacing megaprime81
By megaprime81
Faulty and defective
We've got to replace
megaprime81
He followed our directives
'Til his circuitry defected
And he can no longer function
Without repair
To fix him would be expensive
To trash him is our option
He's short-circuited
Replacement is the best option
It's time to replace
megaprime81
He no longer functions
As he should
And now it's time
To trash the defective model
Called megaprime81
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Monday, February 3, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This is a sci-fi take on the future and how we are all replacable.Comments on "Replacing megaprime81"
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On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, soul_versing
(883)
wrote:
Even without your authors note the message is clear. I have to admit that I teared up at the thought of replacement because it saying you're not worth another cent. Ugh... We are the most wasteful/heartless humans at times. Clean flow and transition of thought. Bows-
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On Friday, February 7, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you; yeah, this was also a reflection of how i feel about myself, which i think you picked up on. I appreciate every comment.
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Feeling a bit automated today? Trapped in the routine? I prescribe a good dousing to short circuit that routine, perhaps a short trip outside of ordinary circles to discover the OOOH's and AAAAAHHH's of an unplanned day spent wholly on self.
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Fascinating concept...not being automated. I appreciate the advice. Thank you.
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
This is a super cool poem and concept. The rise of the robots wants to take down megaprime81.. but he should stand strong against the resistance... perfect ten :)
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On Monday, February 3, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you, angel. Glad you like it.
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