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Tear My Heart in Two
By megaprime81
You can tear my heart out again
You can throw it right on the floor
You have my permission
You can even burn it once more
(You've always burned me)
I still wake up
Thinking of you
Very little happy
Always so blue
Thought you were my love
Though you earned my whole heart
Once more you ripped me in two
(I haven't learned a thing)
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Copyright 2013 megaprime81
Published on Wednesday, December 11, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Once more, from the top...Comments on "Tear My Heart in Two"
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, Dreamscape
(22)
wrote:
I really like the last line, it makes the poem very effective.
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
very cool! liked it alot
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, Dejected_Worth
(84) wrote:
Great concept and digital delivery. Powerful in it's presentation. really enjoyed it
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Hope prevents you from learning I'd say, an unyielding belief that the one you love won't hurt you again. You describe how love can be both powerful and blinding, great write.
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, inhisbelly
(39) wrote:
Really love the way you experimented with the style here. Like 3 melancholy pieces all wrapped up into one.
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On Thursday, December 12, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
This actually made my tear up. I knew the moment I read the title I would like it and...I was right. I was so in-tune with the words here.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Yeah, i'm glad you like it. I like to vary with styles and content, but the saddest stories tend to be the true ones.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
such melancholy words. it made me cry. today is just meant for crying I guess.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Some days are brighter than others. This is just a more dismal day.
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Reaching into the abyss again, I see. Inked powerfully :)~
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On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Thank you. The abyss is where i dwell a lot.
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