Comments by Vexed
- "at first I thought something else was going to happen, but i should have known better...I had to keep reading, had to...nothing less would have satisfied me...really nice write..."
Posted by Vexed on "Stalker" by SilentStalker
- "completely blew me away...it was so sweet that I almost thought a female wrote it...it was so sweet that it almost made me cry...it reminded me of the poem from the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You" I think I will bookmark it..."
Posted by Vexed on "What I Love About You" by SilentStalker
- "hmmm...can't say that the flow was quite as good as the other ones and rhyming might not have been the best option...don't get me wrong...it was still good but maybe develop it into a short story...I think it would make a great short story..."
Posted by Vexed on "Legend of the Kredes" by SilentStalker
- "the flow was smooth...uninterrupted and the rhyming scheme was excellent...I am normally impartial to rhymes but this one was good..."
Posted by Vexed on "The Guard's Tale" by SilentStalker
- "after the first few lines I knew there was a domme in it...I did a little bit of research and could recognize it, great imagery.... I could really hear the whips...and the cries of delight..."
Posted by Vexed on "in the spiders web" by Dead _Poets _Shadow
- "I like this place, the colours are nice and the poem is well written... but most girls can be like that, even a good chunk of guys too... my fave line was "you're a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice""
Posted by Vexed on "What you were" by Adam
- "we all ask questions and our greatest mistake is not sharing the valuable answer, that is how old skills are lost in the world of today... beautifully rendered tho..."
Posted by Vexed on "A Question Only The Dead Can Answer" by veingo
- "halfway is nowhere, half-way is generally meaningless but at half-way you have hope, you end up hoping that you are going to make it all the way but most people don't meet anyone half-way, chillingly surreal..."
Posted by Vexed on ""Median"" by Grim_Sorrow
- "don't we all want that? don't we all want to find an end to this endless war that we are born into and finally find peace in another's arms?"
Posted by Vexed on "Ghost Ship" by Rafe
- "calming down, relaxing, those two things not happening speaks to me of the past week I have lived and yet there is a time and a place relaxation actually reaches for you..."
Posted by Vexed on ". ." by PoeticHellion
- "accusations..... there are too many accusations in the world but I am otherwise speachless..."
Posted by Vexed on "night of numb" by whisperer
- "wow, brought actual tears to my eyes... I like how it felt, in a way, so like what I am feeling... still interesting but I like the first one I read best so far."
Posted by Vexed on "Falling away" by SilentStalker
- "sounds painful, screaming for today and screaming for tomorrow. I mean, I'm a soprano singer and singing high notes every week is painful enough, but screaming, wow...."
Posted by Vexed on "Scream for Tomorrow" by ThoughtsOthoughts
- "my life with my, uh, friend kinda seems like that at the moment except he is still around and will only be moving away in about five months, not dieing..."
Posted by Vexed on "I still scream" by Jaded Jezzabelle
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