What you were

By Adam

You were, perfect, beautiful, and always nice
Now you’re a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice

You were an inspiration, a dream and my reason to live
Now you’re a fear, a cry and my reason to die

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I loved you but I can’t any more

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Published on Thursday, December 1, 2005. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Vaultgrl

Comments on "What you were"

A former member wrote: This poem is so true.
A former member wrote: I really like this and can kinda relate .. I specially like the line " now you're a fear, a cry and a reason to die" good job :)
On Saturday, January 26, 2008, Mari (419) wrote:

that bitch, lol.
On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Vexed (74) wrote:

I like this place, the colours are nice and the poem is well written... but most girls can be like that, even a good chunk of guys too... my fave line was "you're a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice"
On Monday, January 2, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (44) wrote:

"Now you’re a fear, a cry and my reason to die" this is an amazing line, it was perfect
On Sunday, January 1, 2006, sIo (898) wrote:

wow that's harsh.
On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309) wrote:

i've friends..of both sexes..that i could say this 2..this is an awesome write adam..sorry i havent commented on anything..but i hope you do know that i read and dont always comment... -Kel
On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Adam (241) wrote:

As do I and I dont exspect(sp) comments on everything
On Sunday, December 4, 2005, Vexed (74) wrote:

hehe, I know several guys who have gone through a relationship like that with one of my friends, hehe, sums it all up really neatly.
On Saturday, December 3, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219) wrote:

very clear and concise in such few lines that i can totally relate to ^^. hehe great job. i like :)
A former member wrote: this is powerful stuff, u kno tha right? good job
On Friday, December 2, 2005, vaultgrl (185) wrote:

....very powerful write adam....it shows your pain and hurt....keep it up...this new side of your writing is new, but really good....
On Friday, January 20, 2006, vaultgrl (185) wrote:

....and i'm sorry to find that i was the one to inspire your pain....wish i had known......i'm so sorry...allthough i know words can't make up for the way i've made you feel,.....
On Saturday, January 21, 2006, Adam (241) wrote:

always remember that while i was "in pain then" what you have done for me...You were, perfect, beautiful, and always nice.... You were an inspiration, a dream and my reason to live... that is what you are to me, even when i try to hate you i cant do it
On Thursday, December 1, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

*you were an inspiration, a dream and a rare beauty, now you're a fear, a cry, and just so damn ugly*, that's how i would write the second verse, i like it how it is thought so up to you
On Saturday, December 3, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219) wrote:

either way it still sounds good :D
On Sunday, January 1, 2006, Adam (241) wrote:

And i do know that "cold as ice should not be used..." but it fit...