. .

By PoeticHellion

i have a glorious mess on my
.bold.canvas.
spare me some twilight moments,
let me rest peacefully.
i need to relax, let go, free myself.
accomplish me something, woman.
suffer I may, but suffer evering else,
it may.
i am no longer dealing with "organized chaos."
NO.
it's just chaos.
disaray of...
her, him, this, that.
I NEED AN OUTLET.
teach me to relax,
help me let go. (of everything)
.WITHDRAW.
paint me something serene,
and make it snappy
(i can't calm down)
the important things are
.failing.
so much intensity, it only means
ONE THING-

nothing is going to get done.

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© 2006 PoeticHellion
Published on Sunday, May 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The tension in this write is spelled out on my nerves..this was me yesterday.

  • Nail Bunny On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    OOOH... I like it! it is sortof intangible, what i think about it, but please know that i enjoyed it immensley

  • Thorn On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    I do hope the fun times and good moods of late have helped you feel better. ♥♥♥

  • Vexed On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Vexed (74)By person wrote:

    calming down, relaxing, those two things not happening speaks to me of the past week I have lived and yet there is a time and a place relaxation actually reaches for you...

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