Comments by Sin
- "mm mm...little bits of wisdom to savor. sometimes its the short writes that encompass more than a page could do. *tips hat* ~K"
Posted by Sin on "New Symmetry" by jack paper
- "haha instant lust..wicked exchanges that catch us off guard and put a thrill in our veins...brilliant and i love the comic almost sarcastic twist ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "life in cars" by jack paper
- "you already know what i think of this piece...breathtakingly sad, yet so elegantly described it cant help but be beautiful ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Etched (when you left)" by jack paper
- "this was crushing..such sorrow spilled softly..like raindrops sliding down a window ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Falling" by jack paper
- "skeered lol...this made me giggle..it might be the vodka but i couldnt help myself ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Run" by jack paper
- "is there anything more frustrating than a skittish significant other running away from feelings? i think not ~kristy "
Posted by Sin on "connection" by jack paper
- "i couldnt agree more with carl...the best way to rid ourselves of mental poison is to release it through our pen...great write~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "sleepless" by jack paper
- "this was wonderful...and those last two lines left me with a smile ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Muse" by jack paper
- "mm the beauty of snakes..slithering with serpentile grace..tongue flickering, tasting..maybe i read too much into this or perhaps my mind is just in the gutter again but i found this erotic and spicy...great write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Alike (when I bit you)" by jack paper
- "oh the tension and anticipation rolled off this in waves...i could see the predatory stares, the slow slide of a tongue when you can almost taste it...mm this was hot ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Breathe" by jack paper
- "your wording, the images, ahhhh this was sigh worthy..simply beautiful *tips hat* ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Circles" by jack paper
- "oO what happens when the hunter becomes the hunted? is the game not the same when the tables are turned?...i couldnt help but snicker at the ending because i think ive lived this..very spicy write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Terminal" by jack paper
