connection

By jack paper

you see i know what you think
somehow you can marginalize me
turn off the way you feel
try to deny the wonder and intensity
of everything we had

no

of everything we have

oh you said it's all hanging by a thread
but this is no ordinary thread
its a carbon fiber buckyball thread
forged in the fires of creation
it can't be broken

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© 2007 chthonian
Published on Wednesday, January 17, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I am usually the one running from feelings everything thinks that is strong, it is because I am too weak to feel. wonderful write.

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    is there anything more frustrating than a skittish significant other running away from feelings? i think not ~kristy

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 28, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Brilliant, especially for the that last stanza.."forged in the fires of creation/it can't be broken"

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