Comments by purr_verse
- "wonderfully evocative, richly emotive and somehow disturbing piece; i love the imagery you've used here - cleverly constucted throughout. Lovely write. "
Posted by purr_verse on " dark." by Exodus
- ""And I am getting faster cold." - I love this line. I'm still fixated by it. Beautifully written piece; the conclusion is also wonderfully done."
Posted by purr_verse on "collision-" by Exodus
- "the second line of the second stanza... damn, that is excellent. i keep rereading that one! :) great piece overall, and the...quietness...of the closure is especially effective too."
Posted by purr_verse on "it is give." by Exodus
- ""I stopped at the door and fell down the hole in my head.": marvellous. I agree with Lynaes completely, and i really like the title too.
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Posted by purr_verse on "stones for eyes." by Exodus
- "lovely vivid imagery, and the smallmoments of punctuation you've used here are very effective...like a whisper, but with emphasis... Very nice indeed. :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Shield the rain.." by Exodus
- "powerful, sad piece. wonderful opening line, and the thematic repetition/variations within the poem work really well. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Goodbye my love." by Exodus
- ""And freedom she screamed
As she jumped through the field" - this couplet really works for me! and a beautiful piece all around, of course. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "dragonfly" by Exodus
- ""You were walking
Dressed as a King
With your black and colorful posse" - this image really grabs me: i love juxtaposition that walks the slipstreams. :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Drained" by Exodus
- "powerful and sadly confronting... Really strong opening, and i love "your string of electric life/was meant to fade" also. purr (oh, and "your railroad letters" too!)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Much like a tragedy." by Exodus
