papercut.
By Exodus
She spilled your roses.
Over your death red ocean.
She kissed the wind.
She prayed for the nightmare.
She wanted to die.
She wanted to escape.
The remedy.
The used sex.
Spilled over her table top
He said
She had weakness.
In her heart in his hands.
And
The raping of her mind.
Made her immature with
His death threats
And she smiled like a child.
She wanted it more.
She was his paper cut.
She got dirty.
She got infected.
He tasted her blood in his hands
What he was made of.
Was already in hers.
And he smiled like a child.
And she used sex.
He used it on her.
She spilled him over the table top.
And he got dirty.
And he got infected.
She kissed the wind.
she wanted to die.
Awards
Comments on "papercut."
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A former member wrote:
Wow! I'm speechless. It's so open and honest. I love it!
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
It just goes to show, you mess with karma and you'll get kicked right in the ass.
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
this is fabulous. absolutely gorgeously written... i would love to hear it spoken... with a moment of silence to mourn the poem's passing.
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A former member wrote:
wordless....
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Really awesome. So starkly phrased yet so effective.
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
This one offers a mental slideshow of dark and lovely images which amalgamate into something sad and dirty and insightful... I love it... don't let those keys rest!
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
very deep and powerful. loved the comparison to a papercut. it was great. really great.
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, birdwell
(138) wrote:
the darkness emanates profoundly from this piece, reaching out to pull the reader in. incredible ~db~
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
excellent: powerful (as Twilight said) and wonderfully styled. purr
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
this is out of control ... not no polite response ... this is the heavy stuff that only pops up once in awhile ... damn ... thankyou funguy