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Shield the rain..
By Exodus
The black pearl
::Seaside::
By the ocean
A drop of your silver
Innocence
Dripping like the blood
From your pierced fingertips
Once tasted away from a hard on
Euphoria/::Indulge::
I taste the search for gold
Dancing like fire upon your lips
Stinging back at me
Like the bitterness of the sun
Once a star I held in my hands
Burning out, bursting into the explosion
of words, meaning. drowning deeply
in your deepest blue and green.
Never looking back.
Never hurting again
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, March 3, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Shield the rain.."
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, stormtalk
(729)
wrote:
Very interesting and more abstract than your usual work - I like it. I can imagine it recited at a poetry slam - it seems to have the rhythm for it.
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
Notice....this is not about the movie at all....
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Reminds me of Pirates Of The Carribean. A lovely, rich, delicious piece, as purr said, lovely vivid imagery. I love it, awesome work. ~L
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
same here.. wish I hadn't seen the movie before I read this. Awesome bit of poetry. :::OLd
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
lovely vivid imagery, and the smallmoments of punctuation you've used here are very effective...like a whisper, but with emphasis... Very nice indeed. :) purr
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