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stones for eyes.
By Exodus
A flower in the gutter.
Wind follows where it desires
And we spontaneously combust
Into stars oblivion, orange red and white
Running the way to your heart.
I stopped at the door and fell down the hole in my head.
Somewhere I lost myself again before falling in love with you.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "stones for eyes."
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A former member wrote:
Wow...I'm in awe...the way you have such a feel for words..the way you arrange them...the impact they have on your readers...it's all so amazing.
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, purr_verse
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"I stopped at the door and fell down the hole in my head.": marvellous. I agree with Lynaes completely, and i really like the title too.
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
An enchanting, rich use of imagery. And such a striking way of expression. I can feel this one very much, such a perfect description. Gorgeous work. ~L
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A former member wrote:
Something about this just stapled itself to the inside of my head, if I knew it off by heart I would murmur it to myself.. but I don't.. Damn.. This really haunted me.. That last line.. Wow.. I loved. ~Wish Upon A Star
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