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A Bloodshot Dove.
By Exodus
Stars in the TV screen
Die out through. paper thin
The blood of winter slowly
Bleeds through. exposing
The virus
Hands outstretched to help
The others
Too late. screams their eyes
Under a midnight blanket
Of cold
The window was left open
And no one answered your call
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Saturday, January 3, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Bloodshot Dove."
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, Exodus
(172)
wrote:
you know what fishstick...i have no idea what the meaning is behind this piece...lol...weird....
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Me either... and I don't think anyone but you can figure it out, carrotbag mcstabbengeist.
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Chilling and fun, but if you want the readers to see its meaning, you may have to add more clarity.
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A former member wrote:
i agree *shivers*
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
this chills and saddens me... the last lines are painfully poignant. purr
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