Comments by whisperingwalls
- "I love your galactical imagery, normally larger themes and images come off as "too much" but the way this was written deals with them so nicely, agree with dwells, nicely done!"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Timid Galaxy " by serenesavage91
- "This is unbelievable. I haven't visited in a while but i'm glad I came back to this. Love the tree personification, the breakdown into beat poetry, nicely done :)"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "The Weald's Release" by rosemaiden
- "Fuck man, this is deep.. I normally leave constructive criticism... But I'm just going to say it like it is: whatever you we're on when you wrote this, I want some of it :p."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "It's Alive" by Alchemist
- "We tend to be our own worst critics, often what we see in the mirror is nowhere near who we truly are... with that being said, I've faced self issues and you can tell this is passionate poetry... The conflict, loathing, overcoming... you can tell its from the heart and not just bullshit."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Mirror" by serenesavage91
- "wow, there is something about this.. All of your imagery supports itself because it is so vivid.. there is real meaning behind the words... you can sense the passage of time, the darkening mood.. Like grey clouds overhead... Bravo"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Beauty in death and fear" by serenesavage91
- "What a sudden and shattering conclusion; the sudden longing and abandonment is crushing... I love your diction, you use unique words that entice the audience (very descriptive)... Tis always darkest before the dawn? :p"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Flying Above the Night" by serenesavage91
- "So he went out into the midnight cold
and formed a small, drunken snowman
from the gray slush piled by the roadside... What sharp imagery; real, aware writing.. This is beautiful, all of it, but that stanza blew me out of the water."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Vigil" by Blood Saga
- "Wow.. This piece reeks perspective.. Disconnect, helplessness, passion, awareness... been in and out of hospitals; the intensity is relatable."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Room 99" by Phantasmagoria
- "What a gorgeous piece of work. your imagery with lines, maps, borderlines, paths etc was nicely executed... Before hearts learned that melting isn't always good."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "favorite." by Saint Sentient
- "I really enjoyed this. The journey, the hearts personification... These lines struck hard and heavy:
And it will leave a fingerprint
On the mirror of her heart.
Vry deep and vivid, great poem man.
P.S: nice bass, I share the passion"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Wash us Away" by AllenTaylor
- "this is beautiful, a gentle spirit: strength to the weak, courage to the meek... Loved these lines: The wind frequents
Talking of old secrets.... Felt like a testament to your beautiful day; great piece.
"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Thunder" by Ladyhawke
- "Great apprehension... I have an AngelDemon of my own in the past.. They can be treacherous.... Light on the breeze as your words carry anvils to my heart.
Cascading silhouettes of photographs and memories,
And heart-sparked infidelities ... Those lines spoke to me.. Also loved your imagery with the rain and clock.. Tic-tok.. nicely done
"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
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